Thread:Deltora Forever/@comment-29517617-20131127224835

Hey DF, thanks for the recent edits on Lief's article would you want to work some more on Lief's character page? Just revise most of the stuff I wrote in the City of the Rats section of Lief's article, except the stuff about the shop, Jamine being confused and them walking through the plain with the thornbushes. I actually like that. It's just that I feel like some of the paragraphs go on for way too long, and contain way too many details from the book. Maybe I should just break them into pieces by myself... anyway, I would appreciate any help you can give me, and us, and have appreciated any help you have already given us. Sorry, it's just so late here right now, and I really want to have Lief, Barda and Jasmine's pages done as soon as possible. Thank you.

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