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Yeah, but there's also the line which starts with "The companions accused Doom..." (That whole paragraph has past tense at points) And in the next few paragraphs there are a few past tense words. It is possible that the past tense stuff is something that was always there but I overlooked it for some reason, though I don't think that's extremely likely since I've read over the plot summary I originally wrote quite a few times and I did correct any past-tense I accidentally put in there while I was writing the summary.

Hopefully I'll get better at writing more concisely when I have more practice at it. I'll be taking a course in Scientific Writing next year for my university degree, and I've also volunteered to write up chapter summaries and discussion questions for the MOBY group rekilt which will be starting in January on the Outlander Book Club Forum. :D So with luck my summary writing will improve.