Board Thread:General Wiki Discussion/@comment-58.175.222.109-20151123051735/@comment-29517617-20151231092704

'' In the days after the defeat of the final guardian, the Diamond had been returned to the Belt of Deltora. But contrary to what Lief's father had told him, the heir remained in hiding. The three companions rested within the Valley with the newly freed Torans, contemplating what they would do next. ''

Is this the past tense stuff you're refering to?

I have the same problem as you by the way. I also overcompensate when writing articles which is why it takes me so long, and so many edits, to shorten it afterwards, but I've gotten better at writing shortly while working on Lief's page :)