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Hi Jdogno7,

I reverted your edits to the Rithmere page as they didn't make sense grammatically. Don't take this badly, I simply reverted them so you could have another go. For an explanation as to why they were changed back see these links below around the use of semi-colons/colons and and/'as well as'

http://www2.le.ac.uk/offices/ld/resources/writing/grammar/grammar-guides/semicolon

http://site.uit.no/english/grammar/aswellas/

If you need help with the editing, do not hesistate to reply and I can assist you.

Just remember, edits only really need to be made if the wording does not make sense or does not adhere to the Manual of Style, otherwise editing is redundant. Let me know how you go. Its more beneficial to add information to articles that are in need of more info.

Regards,

Archer of Az-Zure